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Meph
Traitor to the AAO crown
Joined: Mon Nov 10, 2008 10:07 pm Posts: 13235 Location: United Kingdom
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Turnabout Carjack There's more to it than what you see... SynopsisAn abandoned car, a theft and a woman too depressed to speak.Seven years after Phoenix Wright lost is badge, Miles Edgeworth was still in shock from the events of Trials & Tribulations. After Prosecutor Godot's crime was discovered, it broke Miles into a confusion. Can prosecutors really become monsters? Does being a prosecutor make one a monster? The only way he could answer this question was by changing his point of view. Thanks to the help of some colleagues in the prosecutors office, Miles was given a defence attorney's badge. Fiz Brown is believed to have stolen a fancy and very expensive new convertible that Rosie Webster recently bought. The car had apparently been driven around the town. It was found lying in the middle of the road about a kilometre away. The only "proof" of Fiz's crime is the fact that she is admitting to it. As soon as Miles Edgeworth was made aware of this, he knew there was more to it than what everyone else saw. When he saw Fiz's eyes in the detention centre, he knew that there was more to this case. He knew that Fiz was not the true criminal. But can Miles claim victory when there is no other possible criminal? Features- The story is loosely based off a storyline in Coronation Street and features the characters involved.
- You can play as Miles Edgeworth at the defence's side of the courtroom.
- The story is so emotional that it might even make you cry!
- Use of the Ace Attorney Investigations: Miles Edgeworth soundtrack.
PartsPart 1: Trial Former ( Click here to play) Fiz Brown is accused of stealing a car and is even admitting to it! Is she really telling the truth? Part 2: Trial Middle ( Click here to play) Franziska von Karma won't go down that easy! Can the victim shed light on the situation? Part 3: Trial Latter ( Click here to play) In a trial that's going nowhere fast, can Miles Edgeworth solve this case once and for all? If you've already seen the Coronation Street episodes that this was loosely based on, please use spoiler tags when discussing spoilers.
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henke37
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Frame 135 and 325 lacks the word "is". Otherwise, you did really well. Pitty that the objection sound has that silly initial pause, but that's not you fault. Also, please remember to finish this one. You do have a habit of forgetting cases.
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Meph
Traitor to the AAO crown
Joined: Mon Nov 10, 2008 10:07 pm Posts: 13235 Location: United Kingdom
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henke37 wrote: Also, please remember to finish this one. You do have a habit of forgetting cases. It's not that I forget them. When I make cases, I make details of the story up as I go along. However, this one's different. I've thought everything through.
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Darkdamacus
Joined: Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:44 pm Posts: 12
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Hahah, I do the same thing, work on one trial, get a new Idea, Forget the old one and make a new one 
As for your case, Great work! Although, I did notice one really really small problem.. When you cross examine Ema for the first time and you press her third statement, Her last sentence uses the "Automatic" tone of blipblip'ing.. (I dunno what to call it, I go by Edgeworth's understandings XD)
Other than that, Great work!
P.S: You beat me to publishing a case with Edgeworth as the defense! :[
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Kenneth3k1
Joined: Sun Jun 28, 2009 9:15 pm Posts: 56
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Well take your time I like a quality trial I haven't seen many new trials lately...
I do the same thing I think of a good idea and the resst of the plots flow into my head as I write it.
Nice job on the trial WOOPDY DO!!!
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| Sun Aug 16, 2009 11:28 pm |
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Meph
Traitor to the AAO crown
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I'm glad you all like it. 
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| Sun Aug 16, 2009 11:37 pm |
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Court-Records
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OBJECTION! When Miles makes his objection, Gumshoe mentions a scary look. This is the exact text: You need to change the he's to she's. OBJECTION! OBJECTION! In the second testimony when you present, he says HOLD IT, even though the thing says OBJECTION! OBJECTION! When Franzy asks Everyone talks in the defendants area. <.< Other than those flaws, I LOVE IT. But please, fix those? I hold you to a high standard because you are an Mod, who seems to be partly in charge of cases.
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Meph
Traitor to the AAO crown
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Thanks for noticing those mistakes. I've corrected them.  And I'm glad you liked it.
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| Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:24 pm |
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Court-Records
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No problem. ^^ Yes, and I hope to see more soon. (Of course, what I really need to do is stop playing cases and finish my own...XD)
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| Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:30 pm |
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Darkdamacus
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Quote: (Of course, what I really need to do is stop playing cases and finish my own...XD)
I can relate completely. XD
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FrozenPhoenix
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An Ace Attorney case that ISN'T a murder? How absurd! But refreshing. I only noticed two things wrong: Franny's Objection has a delay in it. You might want to use the one tetris posted. I love the trial though. It was excellent.
_________________Turnabout Office: Part 1 Part 2The Perfect Turnabout: Part 1 Part 2 Part 3
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Meph
Traitor to the AAO crown
Joined: Mon Nov 10, 2008 10:07 pm Posts: 13235 Location: United Kingdom
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FrozenPhoenix wrote: Franny's Objection has a delay in it. You might want to use the one tetris posted. No. If the default one used in AAO is broken, then it needs to be fixed. 
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Meph
Traitor to the AAO crown
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Part 2 is ready! I hope you all enjoy this short part, which is a very important of the story. http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=8287I will start working on Part 3 after Unas has completed the AAO Trial Editor version 5.
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Court-Records
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No, To be Continued? Rather short, and a little like TEH HELL?! I need moar! XD I felt like it was a tiny little clip compared to the avg. part of a case. <.< However, it was very important, and did give them a new clue. I hope to see part 3 soon. Where oh where is this trial headed?
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henke37
Security expert / tools programmer
Joined: Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:42 pm Posts: 3029 Location: Sweden
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A bit thin on the sound effects in my opinion.
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