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Meph
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Turnabout Chill
Will Phoenix be able to save Iris from a guilty verdict once again?
CANCELLED StorySister Bikini has been murdered by someone unknown in the Inner Temple. The police believe it was Sister Iris, who was in the room at the time, but was it really her? Phoenix doesn't think so, and is prepared to defend Iris to the bitter end. Join Phoenix Wright in another exciting courtroom adventure, with more evidence, the many interesting characters and plently of contradictions. DescriptionPart 1 is a bit easy, simple and short, but still fun. Part 2 will be more challenging for most and longer. This is the first case I have ever made, but I believe it is still of high quality. Enjoy and tell me your opinions. Trial Former
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Flandre
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If I must say, it was fairly short and lacked content, but the feel of it was fresh and one of the few playable ones here. Also, learn how to add a testimony, like Gumshoe saying, "The murder must have thrown the weapon into Eagle River", then create an objection based off of that.
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Meph
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How I presented it was the intention, but adding it to the testimony is a far better idea. 
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Dramatica
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Indeed.
However, it was one of the few decent ones around here, and was fun to play. Good job.
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Meph
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The case has been improved based on current feedback (along with some other minor addictions). Tell me what you all think.
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Forcemaster
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Meph wrote: The case has been improved based on current feedback (along with some other minor addictions). Tell me what you all think. Like, smoking? *shot*
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Meph
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Are there any imperfections in Part 1? I want it to seem exactly like a proper Ace Attorney game that was written by Shu.
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Meph
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I've recreated the trial from scratch in v4. It now makes use of v4's new features.
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Unas
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You should edit your first post to link to the new one _________________   If knowledge can create problems, it is not through ignorance that we can solve them. Si le savoir peut créer des problèmes, ce n'est pas l'ignorance qui les résoudra. ( Isaac Asimov )
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Meph
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Woops. Looks like I forgot.  Thanks for reminding me.
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cooki3000
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How did you do that of adding testimony? I tried but I couldn't do.
By the way, when you point the contradiction on the photo the judge appears above the photo.
You forgot to put "hide character".
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Meph
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Thank you for pointing out that bug to me, cooki.
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henke37
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Hey, are you abandoning this case? You started a new one without finishing this one.
Also, "stab womb" and "no where".
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Meph
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henke37 wrote: Hey, are you abandoning this case? You started a new one without finishing this one. Yes. I think I have abandoned it. When I create cases, I only have a basic idea for the story in mind. I think of all the details as I go along. That's why this project has failed. However, if anyone would like to see what I've done so far, I won't mind releasing it. henke37 wrote: Also, "stab womb". I say. I didn't realise my case was about female anatomy. Anyway, thank you. I'll fix that.
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Meph
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Gaaah. I always cringe when I read the old posts in this thread. It's like I was trying to be excessively posh to fit in.  Anyway, I've decided to cancel this project. It's never going to be finished anyway. However, there's no point letting my work go to waste, so I'm releasing what I've done so far in chapter 2. http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=4985
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