Once again, another typo, sorry if I'm being rude.
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Strenght should be Strength. Oppinion should be opinion.
I actually had the opinion typo thrice. Fixed, fixed and fixed! And, no you're not being rude. I'll gladly correct such errors whenever they occur. They tend to sneak in when writing so much in a non native language.
General Cleanliness: Is it a good idea to show two characters on the Court Record before they're introduced? And if we look at the updated* plans
Characters: Matt Silver: Matt Silver seems like a more beat down and disgraced version of Wright. It is hilarious. Although, I expect his voice to be deeper then Wright's high pitched yelling. Just my two cents
Contradictions: I didn't understand the last contradiction of Hammond. Couldn't Hammond grab the weapon with her left hand and then stab him across the torso?
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Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:40 pm
TwiGav
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Still slowly progressing on this. However, I have just found a glaring logical error in the second half of part 3's planned testimonies, and I'll have to rewrite those before I can actually go on.
Haha, yeah. I've been swamped all this last time by a combination of lack of motivation, writer's block and a lot of stuff distracting me (such as having moved last December), but now I'll hopefully be able to get my butt moving and finish this third part. I figure a lot of people who played the first two parts have been eagerly waiting for it, and I don't want do disappoint.
Narkoh is immortal, this is common knowledge by now.
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Bad Player wrote:
Yes, that's exactly correct. The purpose of the test is to test whether you have an understanding of the material, not if you've simply memorized it and can regurgitate it. In fact, I'm sure the reason he put the 'trick questions' on the test was in order to see who understood the material and was paying attention and who was simply memorizing facts without taking the time and effort to actually understand them.
Tue Mar 06, 2012 1:43 am
Blackrune
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Yeah, this is THE stealth project. It shall never truly die. He'll always return. ... On another note, I can't wait for the next part. I think I'll play the previous ones again just to be prepared. ^^
"The enemy is a very good teacher" --- The Dalai Lama
Tue Mar 06, 2012 1:47 am
Dypo deLina
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Time has taught us never to worry about Narokh. Should he come to die, his spirit will come back to work on this, as was decreed in the Almighty Almanak of Omniscience.
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Tue Mar 06, 2012 8:44 am
Narokh
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Yeah baby, I'm on a roll! Almost 400 frames done in the last few days, so it's safe to say that my writer's block / lack of motivation is gone for now. And I intend to use this to get this little thing finished before next month! So stay tuned for part 3-3. It should be ready soon!
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