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nivaG
Joined: Tue Jul 26, 2011 10:26 pm Posts: 12
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This trial series is superb! Really nice story, not easy and with custom sprites. I gotta say, your trials are the best AAO trials that I've played. There seems to be a problem with Tyron sprites though: the fact that he's always smiling. The closest thing to a serious pose he has is the desk slam, and he's smiling there. Having a second desk slam, in which he's serious, would be nice. But otherwise, perfect.
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| Wed Aug 10, 2011 8:29 pm |
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Narokh
Joined: Sun Mar 29, 2009 8:18 pm Posts: 251 Location: Germany
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nivaG wrote: This trial series is superb! Really nice story, not easy and with custom sprites. I gotta say, your trials are the best AAO trials that I've played. There seems to be a problem with Tyron sprites though: the fact that he's always smiling. The closest thing to a serious pose he has is the desk slam, and he's smiling there. Having a second desk slam, in which he's serious, would be nice. But otherwise, perfect. First of all, thank you very kindly for your praise. I'm very flattered that you think so. As for Jame's sprites, that is mainly a reason of the sources I had available to create them. Most of them consist of parts from existing sprites, as my spriting skills are very limited. The Klavier sprites I used for his head didn't allow much of a different look. However, I actually like his expressions. He's supposed to be a more seasoned attorney with a very confident demeanor, as opposed to the easier to fluster fresh attorneys. I think it fits him rather well.
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| Fri Aug 12, 2011 11:59 pm |
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flitchard
Joined: Sat Jan 01, 2011 6:52 am Posts: 249
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I like Payne in this one...
Oh no, he's still here...
Life is not an action move!
C-can't I just stay down here?
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.Saboteur
Joined: Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:46 am Posts: 210 Location: USA
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This series is brilliant. Deception is remarkable, and I haven't completed Convention yet but it's looking just the same way so far. This series deserves a lot more attention than it currently has, please keep going at it. 
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| Tue Aug 16, 2011 4:10 pm |
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Narokh
Joined: Sun Mar 29, 2009 8:18 pm Posts: 251 Location: Germany
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That Guy wrote: This series is brilliant. Deception is remarkable, and I haven't completed Convention yet but it's looking just the same way so far. This series deserves a lot more attention than it currently has, please keep going at it.  I try, but currently I've been once again struck by a bad case of lack of motivation and writer's block. *sigh* So, sorry to everyone for keeping you waiting for 3-3. I hope I'll be able to work on it again soon.
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| Wed Aug 17, 2011 11:37 pm |
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Narokh
Joined: Sun Mar 29, 2009 8:18 pm Posts: 251 Location: Germany
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Wow, sorry everybody for being inactive for such a long time... again. I just wanted to give all of you a heads up that I recently got to work a bit on 3-3 again. Not much, but it might be a good sign that my motivation is slowly coming back. Be assured that I still have every intention to finish this case (and the series). It's just these damn motivation failures and writer's blocks that slow down my work so immensely...
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SwagmaWampyr
Joined: Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:15 pm Posts: 6272 Location: The mucky muck castle made of clouds
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Narokh, it's been this long
I'm pretty sure you're immortal, I'm not worried
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Narokh
Joined: Sun Mar 29, 2009 8:18 pm Posts: 251 Location: Germany
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Hey everyone, just wanted to give yet another life-sign and the reassurance that this project is not quite dead... yet.
As of lately, I regained a bit of motivation and have resumed work on case Part 3-3 in a slow pace. Hope I'll be able to finish it without another huge hiatus.
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Sligneris
Joined: Sat Oct 01, 2011 8:22 pm Posts: 1001
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I really like your trials ^^ But I noticed a mistake in script. Once Jonathan Blake after first trial said something like "your defendant". It should "your client" I think.
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| Sun Jan 29, 2012 10:30 pm |
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Narokh
Joined: Sun Mar 29, 2009 8:18 pm Posts: 251 Location: Germany
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Spode42 wrote: I really like your trials ^^ But I noticed a mistake in script. Once Jonathan Blake after first trial said something like "your defendant". It should "your client" I think. Thank you, I'm glad to hear you like them. But wouldn't that make not much of a difference? She is the defendant of the trial after all.
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Detective Luke Atmey
Joined: Wed Oct 12, 2011 12:14 am Posts: 1926 Location: Empire Pork Building, His Highness's Treasure Room.
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Started playing Deception. Got no idea what to present in the first testimony, however, I know it must have to do with the statement "I tried to steal something from the living room and he caught me. So I took the knife..." But I don't know what to present. And anyway, where did she get the knife from?
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Meph
Traitor to the AAO crown
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Narokh wrote: But wouldn't that make not much of a difference? She is the defendant of the trial after all. Yeah. Both can be used. But I think "your defendant" would be used when the speaker is trying to sound patronising. 
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Detective Luke Atmey
Joined: Wed Oct 12, 2011 12:14 am Posts: 1926 Location: Empire Pork Building, His Highness's Treasure Room.
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Figured it out. Also, typos. Yes, this is for Deception.
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Narokh
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Detective Luke Atmey wrote: Figured it out. Also, typos. Yes, this is for Deception. Ah, thanks for pointing it out. That was my very first case and when I wrote it I didn't use a spell checking plug-in yet. Fixed it!
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Detective Luke Atmey
Joined: Wed Oct 12, 2011 12:14 am Posts: 1926 Location: Empire Pork Building, His Highness's Treasure Room.
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Once again, another typo, sorry if I'm being rude.
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