-Argh! It's late. I completely forgot to start writing down my comments. Err... currently at the crime
scene. Examined the gas canisters already.
No problem.
-The simple fact that presenting the Attorney's Badge garners a response gives this trial about 50 extra
points.
I think BB did that. I was mostly an editor and consultant.
-50 extra points than what, you ask? I have no idea. I wasn't aware that I even had a points system. But 50
points is probably a lot. So yeah.
Don't worry. It's still worth more than my points.
-Examined the Flue... oh man that's a boring comment. It's only 3 AM. Need write more. And stuff. Perhaps
investigations are just harder to comment on?
I'd imagine so, yeah.
-"Who are you, and who said you could come in here?" Isn't that something you should have asked before you
let him in? Seriously, I don't think anyone in the AA universe locks their doors. XD
I know of very few locked objects in AA. The only one that comes to mind is safe from the beginning of 3-2
-Saw her? Interesting. Haha, her name should be Ashley Sawyer. D-Do you get it? Sawyer? Saw her? It's
similar to Sahwit--agh, forget it.
Is she related to Tom?
-Eh, she seems less suspicious than Wocky did.
???
-Well, if the prosecutor actually DID anything at all, that automatically means it's not Payne, though one
could have figured that already. My bet's on Von Karma.
...
-AHA! 'Her'. I is right.
Well, BB didn't want to do Klavier and Payne would be silly.
-Watch it be Jessica Poole... actually, that would be pretty epic.

-It's Leek Spin!

-Sal Outte? That's... very strange. At the moment, I'm watching a comedy sketch that is discussing what
different ethnicities are referred to when they're considered a sellout.
I can read minds, didn't you know?
-I wanted to make an offhanded comment about how it was strange that Apollo pictured Trucy putting things in
her panties... but the moment has passed.
...Blerg. Nice image you just gave me.
-...soooooo I guess Apollo didn't noticed the 'fellow attorney' thing.

-Oh. Um. Nevermind.

-Hehe... Johnny Peck.
A combination of two DA-related names I came up with on a whim.
-Turner Grey's Anatomy. XD Oh my goodness. I shouldn't have laughed at that.
Originally it was just Grey's Anatomy, but I decided to change it.
-OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH Amber 'Burns' Ashley 'Burns'... I JUST NOW GOT IT.
And Ash Burns. Can't forget the father, can we?
-What a perfect way to ruin the moment!

-I don't see the resemblance.

-So Sal Outte's a witness, right? Don't think that big of a deal would be made about him otherwise.
You have no idea, friend.
-M'boy... never a good sign.
I wonder what's for dinner.
-Ah, there's the convenient dropping of important evidence!

-Fire-related pun? More like fire-related... ar-sun.
wut
-Wait, he's a witness to the car bombing? Huh. I assumed the murder had taken place a long time ago...
Whelp, you know what they say: When you assume, you make an ass out of you and me!

-Ah, Stickler. It's like you never left us.
Stickler was VERY fun to write. More people need to put him in fancases.
-...eh? Didn't Peck say it was a month ago? Now it's a year ago?
I'll fix that later. That's what you get with having two writers.
-Blue Lampshades to the Fifth Power.

-Attempted murder of Phoenix Wright? Is that an allusion to something?
Maybe.....(Hint: Reinstate)
-IT'S THE PLOT DEVICE

-I don't know why, but the fact that he specifically said Brooklyn makes me smile.
I was worried about how Cueball would turn out because he seemed too much like Larry to me. I'm glad to see he outshown every other OC in the trial.
-Bushes are quite intelligent this time of year! I'm trying to grow Akinators. Yes, genies come from bushes.
Duh.

-I'd think it would be because Payne was the prosecutor, actually.

-She's lying about what she knows about Cueball? Interesting.
Cueball will be developed more in pt. 2.
-OH GEE I WONDER WHAT COULD HELP ME FIND SUCH A THING... Obviously the Details on the Flue!
Of course.
-Epic slow motion Mr. Hat.
Slow-mo makes everything better.
-WHAAAAAAAT?!

-Oh, it's a TV--yeah.

-...the trial theme?
I felt it worked good for Peck's Office theme.
-Guessing this 'mistress' was the one having the affair with Mr. Burns.
Good, solid deduction. We'll see if you're right soon.
-Ah. It was being recorded. Wonder if that's going to come up in the trial and make the evidence illegal...
...Thanks for that idea.
-Or perhaps it was just for that scene. Hm. So whoever did it, they're definitely tied with the Rivales...
Well, who here is tied to the Rivales? Hmmmmmm.......
-So before I continue on, I'd like to put a few of my thoughts here. I think Vex Vulper killed Mr. Burns and
Gilligan burned Ashley's house down.
Not without help from Star Atmey and Andrew Gynus, I'm sure.
-Ok, seriously. I think that Amber was the one that killed Mr. Burns. I have two things going for this: 1.
It would explain the 'other crime' she commited, and 2. It's so unexpected and awesome that I just WANT to
see it happen. Who burned the house down? I'm thinking it was Ashley herself. One way or another, she
figured out that Amber was the one behind her husband's murder. She wanted to get her for it. Honestly, I
think that would be brilliant. It's totally the way I would do it. It's not very likely, though, simply
because my predictions are NEVER right...
I can tell you Amber did not kill Ash. We still want a happy ending.
-TRIAL TIME

-Easy, now. You know how diaries as evidence turn out, Apollo...
More people brought that up than I thought.
-Agh. Looks like my theory's wrong. I assume Amber's reaction means that THAT was the crime she commited...
Where's your PROOF!?
-Theeeeeeeeere's Franzy~
Just the same as she ever was.
-Phoenix? Prosecution's aide...? Hm.
BB's surprisingly good at writing him. Phoenix will probably pull some kind of trolololololo move off in the later stages of the trial.
-Easy enough to spot.

-Pressed everything,,, see if I'm right.

-Thought I was wrong at first, because da moosek didn't stop. Apparently not.
Forgot to stop the music.
-..what a jerk. D:
That was such an amazing line. Kudos to BB.
-I knew Stickler would come back eventually.
I loved him too much for him not to.
-I'm guessing Stickler's about to pull a Moe...

-...yep. XD

-Best testimony ever.
This was all BB's work. I was really surprised at how IC it was.
-WOW AND DAMN
More awesome BB work.
-It's... over? Woah. Very incomplete indeed.

Well, for what's playable, anyway.

Koopa, Blader... I REALLY enjoyed it. The story was incredibly interesting. The writing was good. The characters were good. (I just love Cueball!) There were a ton of errors that gives it that new trial smell, but is to be expected. (...why am I getting deja vu?) It's a little hard to comment on much else, as it's not finished and the trial hasn't even really started. Either way, I definitely enjoyed it. I can't wait for this to be finished. Good luck with the competition, guys!
Thank you for your review, Gumpei! Yeah, it's definitely incomplete, but thank you all the same. Trust me, there's more to come!