This case is still in development. Feel free to elaborate on its contents~!!

Trial Series: Phoenix Wright: For The Future
Case 1: Journey To The Turnabout
(Warning: There are JFA & T&T spoilers in this case.)

Trial Part 1: http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=21880
Trial Part 2: http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=22780
Trial Part 3: ~In Development~

This time he faces a familiar enemy who once had him on edge. One who's identity remains hidden throughout the trial until the very end. That enemy is known to have put Phoenix in a very remembered crisis, one that he wishes not to occur yet again. Phoenix Wright tries his best to reveal the crime's true plot, and the murderer's true identity. The truth of the crime Phoenix Wright has to solve is quite impossible to believe... But as they say... Nothing is impossible.

Was kinda iffy on the prologue, but let me say that you did a very good characterization on the thief!

I'm really enjoying this so far (there are actually some bugs that needs pointed out...)

LOL @ Gumshoe pay joke.

So far, I'm at CE1, you've definitely shown you have a mastering of the basics of the editor so far TK!

Sorry to say you already did. Mainly, what is this case about, or rather, what is this series about... But enough about that, let me welcome you to AAO. Here's my report on this case so far.



It's not my usual bug report, but I see this case has a lot of potential. You're doing a lot of things right for this trial. Just check over your grammar and spelling. I look forward to part 2. Most of your characters are very in-character, but Gumshoe. For ron, though... Don't use black. Use grey to signify whispering. It's hard to read black on a grey background.

A new trial... and I like what I see so far.

Let's see


Pros:
-the basic structure of a trial is kept (gratz, not everyone gets it that right the first time already)
-Nice dialogues, I must say (but that's what I almost always say. It just means that I like your writing style.^^)
-Glove Prints (don't ask why, but that's a huge pro for me)

Con:
-the minor issues I pointed out above
-autopsy-time-contradictions are overused, but this one had a funny explanation so whatever.


Conclusion:
Approved. I want more. xD
No really, the contradictions weren't that hard to spot but how you made Phoenix point them out felt quite AA-like. (the satisfaction from rubbing it into the witness' face) I also enjoyed that classic fingerprints-problem logic-battle.
And Maggey's suggested explanation for the prints on the knife was epic. (I could literally picture that happen in my head... I don't know whether I should be happy about that. >_>)

Thanks guys! Your opinions and criticism really do help me out, I'll do my best to revise my trial part one, and then I'll get going on part two

And I'm glad to see that people actually love my work *tear*

I really liked your trial, though the second CE was quite difficult to find. Nevertheless, this is excellent work indeed.

The intro has a new remodel now!

I know you're eager to show off your trial, but bumping the thread isn't the best idea. As a written rule, you're limited to one bump per 12 hours. As an unwritten rule, excessive bumping and advertising is heavily frowned upon... That said, I'm liking your fixes so far...

You should feel very proud of yourself. In a recent string of very poorly written and rushed 1st trials, your trial is refreshing, like a spring breeze.

Ahem... Again, I look forward to part 2. Keep doing what you know how to do.

Sorry! Didn't know that. I'll keep that in mind.

I CAN HEAR EVERYTHING YOU SAY!!!!


Haha, I like the parody of the monologue(don't quote me on that though), and it fit really well with the character =]

I'll actually finish this if I have time tomorrow, but from what I saw (still at CE1), you deserve a pat on the back , this is a very enjoyable 1st time trial that I've seen in awhile.

When did you start working on this btw?

Thanks Huddini!
I started working on this like three weeks ago. It was an idea that just kept prodding my head, I just had to make this case, you know? ^.^
Ideas would always keep coming into my head, but what strives me to keep going on with my series is the crime.
And what do I mean by that? That answer will come someday... XD

Things seemed good, and now I present to you guys, Journey To The Turnabout Part 2!
Enjoy.

Well that took longer than you said it would.

I approve of this. Well you already know my opinion so there's not really something left for me to say.
But maaan, that unnecessarily detailed testimony was a pain.

Hehe, very sorry.
I kept checking in with the second beta-tester, trying to wait for results.

Just a fact, I wasn't really impatient.
I was just worried that they decided not to beta-test.

For a week, they wouldn't reply at all.
So I just got a new person about two days ago, did it in one day, said it was splendid.
So with that beta-tester, and you Blackrune, it is now completed. Thanks.

Hey man. Sorry I haven't been able to test your trial. I was dealing with real-life problems, so I owe you an apology for not being able to keep my promise. I know it's not much at this point, but I'll play your part right now and PM you the results.

Once again, I am truly sorry.