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Koda's World of Art (Requests Closed + Rainbow Dash DiS)
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Tap
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I really like your logo. ^^ It looks very AA-ish. 
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| Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:13 am |
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Koda
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Thanks Tap.
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| Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:14 am |
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The logo looks nice, as does the breakdown. But the aide sprite sorta looks like she's slouching. I'd just put the neck and head directly above the body instead of practically next to it.
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| Tue Aug 23, 2011 8:22 am |
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Koda
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Thanks for the crit, will definitely fix. 
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Everything is great. I love them all... well...
The co-council sprite is too tiny. The body's awkward. She DOES look like she's slouching and it doesn't look very... pleasant... But the logo is definitely very nice and of high-quality.
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| Tue Aug 23, 2011 8:23 pm |
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Koda
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Thanks Mimi. I've really got to learn anatomy one of these days. For something different, art of Leon for the box art. I've decided to go for a completely different style, to give the game a more unique feel.  I will redo Analiesse in this style as well.
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Such a big picture... xD
Very good, Nudal.
Very good drawing.
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| Thu Aug 25, 2011 5:50 am |
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Koda
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Haha, resized will look better. Thank Mango!
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| Thu Aug 25, 2011 5:12 pm |
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Mimi Mika
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Mmmm, love the drawing~~ Your shading is very clear and concise, unlike mine. XD
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It looks good, but, the shading on the skin, it, kinda scares me, but, overall, it's very well made.
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| Sun Aug 28, 2011 10:00 pm |
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I like the artwork!
But why is his nose facing the wrong way? :3
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| Sun Aug 28, 2011 10:18 pm |
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Koda
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Thanks for the comments, everyone! Whirlwind --> I wasn't aware that your nose could be facing the wrong way. 
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Whirlwind
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Although it's really small, by the way that his shoulders and face are positioned, his nose should be facing to the right.
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| Sun Sep 04, 2011 10:31 pm |
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Koda
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This is a character for Rendezvous named Scoop McLean.  The microphone texture was done by MLK though slightly edited by me, so thanks to him. Areas in which I could improve would be very useful.
Last edited by Koda on Mon Jan 16, 2012 4:47 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Nudalman wrote: This is a character for Rendezvous named Scoop McLean.
[img=http://oi43.tinypic.com/fka9ud.jpg[/img]
The microphone texture was done by MLK though slightly edited by me, so thanks to him.
Areas in which I could improve would be very useful. Uh...Nudal? I think you made a mistake with the img tags...
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| Mon Jan 16, 2012 4:43 am |
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