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FenrirDarkWolf's Art (Requests Full)
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FenrirDarkWolf
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In the process of making a trial, I made two new sprites for this guy.
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| Thu Mar 15, 2012 7:29 pm |
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BynineB
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frankly he looks very feminine. or childish. the small nose, girlish hair, large eyes, and light eyebrows all contribute to this. you've also got a lot of weird pillow shading going on, especially on his white shirt under the jacket (shadows are coming from all sides, so it looks like it's sticking out) and on the shirt collar of the second pose. said arm also is completely flat and looks like it's taped to his chest.
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| Sat Mar 17, 2012 2:35 am |
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FenrirDarkWolf
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The feminine look of him was actually intended, and will be joked on multiple times on the trial I'm working on him with. About the arm and the shading, I actually have no idea what to do with that, I never had been good with scratching things (like most of the shirt and the arm.) In other news I made, well, something whom looks much too like Daryan, but it wouldn't feel right to change it.    And Daryan with a forehead! 
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| Sat Mar 17, 2012 3:09 am |
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Unknown Detective
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Consider removing the lightest shades.
They would make the sprite look a bit different, and less Daryan.
The arm in the second and third sprite look a bit different compared to the rest of coat.
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| Sat Mar 17, 2012 3:20 am |
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FenrirDarkWolf
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I see what you mean about the lightest shade, and the fact the arms come from Jake may have something to do with the difference between the other arm.
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| Sat Mar 17, 2012 3:25 am |
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Spongesonic IN COURT
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Can I use you Apollo front sprites?
Never mind. I don't need them after all.
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| Tue Mar 20, 2012 4:55 am |
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Sligneris
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When are you going to make those new Lana sprites you talked about? 
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| Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:17 am |
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FenrirDarkWolf
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Spode42 wrote: When are you going to make those new Lana sprites you talked about? I'll get around to them, eventually. Whenever eventually is...
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| Thu Mar 22, 2012 3:08 am |
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FenrirDarkWolf
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I need your guys input on this: Attachment:
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| Sun Apr 01, 2012 7:43 am |
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McG
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I have no idea of what the thing around his eye is, but otherwise, it looks good enough :3
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| Sun Apr 01, 2012 5:29 pm |
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FenrirDarkWolf
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It's supposed to be a tattoo, but, I failed at it. ^^'
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| Sun Apr 01, 2012 7:21 pm |
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Whirlwind
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The head needs work, and the colors on the inside of the jacket don't work very well, but it's a good base.
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| Sun Apr 01, 2012 10:21 pm |
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McG
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Well, the tattoo looks like a solid object. Use lighter colors or lighter borders or something.
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| Mon Apr 02, 2012 12:48 am |
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Lind
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My main complaint with this lies in the colour scheme. This could be a much better sprite, but the colouring of all of his clothes clash horribly. Also, the tattoo should not have separate shading to the rest of his skin. It's shaded as though it's a 3-dimensional object.
In terms of sprite structure, it's not bad, but I strongly recommend changing the mouth and nose. It's far too Klavier right now.
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| Mon Apr 02, 2012 1:11 am |
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FenrirDarkWolf
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While I have yet to fix the clothes, tell me what you think of the new tattoo! Attachment:
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And here's it is if you wanna see it: Attachment:
crest.png [ 510 Bytes | Viewed 11 times ]
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| Mon Apr 02, 2012 5:10 am |
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