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How should I handle this?
Abdrige it- Nobody wants to hear all that old rubbish! 36%  36%  [ 8 ]
Change some of the dialogue- People these days won't understand the way they speak. 41%  41%  [ 9 ]
Don't touch it- It's a literary masterpiece, it doesn't need any modifications from you. 23%  23%  [ 5 ]
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William Shakespeare's famous play...in AAO form!
Yes, that's right, I'm making a visual novel trial thing of Romeo and Juliet. I don't know how long it'll take, but it should be done in a few weeks/months.
Spoiler : Story :
Surely you know the story of Romeo and Juliet? For those of you who don't know the story, basically there are these 2 families and a boy from one family meets a girl from another and they fall in love.

Spoiler : Screenshots :
ImageThe logo at the start.
ImageA quote from the play.
ImageAn unintended interruption.

Spoiler : Characters :
Romeo: Ron DeLite

Juliet: Ema Skye (young)

Tybalt: Wocky Kitaki

Friar Lawrence: Guy Eldoon

Prince: Dick Gumshoe

Mercutio: Larry Butz

Count Paris: Miles Edgeworth

Benvolio: Kristoph Gavin

Nurse: Plum Kitaki

Capulet: Damon Gant

Lady Capulet: Desiree Delite

Montague: Hobo Phoenix

Lady Montague: Maya (think of the shipping!)

Narrator: Trucy Wright

If anyone's interested in beta-testing/proofreading to make sure there are no glitches, typos or general errors, just say.
I hope you'll like this project, and...that's it.

UPDATE: Okay, I'm back so I can make progress.


PROGRESS LEVEL: 5%
Thanks to Demure for the logo.

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Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:15 pm
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What about an AAO version of RomeoXJuliet? :awesome:

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Will this be a shortened version?

enigma wrote:
What about an AAO version of RomeoXJuliet? :awesome:

OH, PLEASE, HECK, NO!

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I've always been fond of stories involving love and this intrigues me since this famous tale will be AA-themed. I'm certainly looking forward to this!

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Meph wrote:
enigma wrote:
What about an AAO version of RomeoXJuliet? :awesome:

OH, PLEASE, HECK, NO!

What? You've got something against good anime? Just because it's not made by Disney.

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enigma wrote:
Meph wrote:
enigma wrote:
What about an AAO version of RomeoXJuliet? :awesome:

OH, PLEASE, HECK, NO!

What? You've got something against good anime? Just because it's not made by Disney.

Huh? Oh, I thought you meant Romeo + Juliet.

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Meph wrote:
Huh? Oh, I thought you meant Romeo + Juliet.

OH, PLEASE, HELL NO!!!

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I don't get why "heck no!" Should I read the article to find out? BTW, will Atmey be in there?

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I don't get why "heck no!" Should I read the article to find out? BTW, will Atmey be in there?

He should be the head of the house of montegue and the head of capulet shall be MaskDeMasque. Or Edgey and Phoenix. Whatever works.

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TQT is doing something similar to this, as was evidenced in its prologue. It isn't a direct telling of the story though... and saying exactly how it ties into it would be giving away a bit much so I'mma shut up. :P Good luck with this.

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Okay, I'm back so I can answer your questions.
Meph wrote:
Will this be a shortened version?

No. Maybe. WE SHALL SEE.
enigma wrote:
What about an AAO version of RomeoXJuliet? :awesome:

No, this will be the original play. I have a copy of it.

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I don't get why "heck no!" Should I read the article to find out? BTW, will Atmey be in there?


To answer your question, I shall post the characters in the main post. If you don't like them, just tell me and I'll see if I can change it.

Meph wrote:
Huh? Oh, I thought you meant Romeo + Juliet.


Hey, I like that film!

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Hey, I like that film!

Well it was certainly... contemporary. I can appreciate how it tries to bring it to a younger audience, though.

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UPDATE: Added a poll.

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WHO CARES IF IT'S A DOUBLE POST IT'S MY TOPIC SO THERE
I've decided to make it a meta-play. It's the characters of the series playing roles, as you can see in one of the screenshots. So, being a trial of a play, I think the dialogue should be kept the same. You don't get plays of Romeo and Juliet where they change the speech.

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♂ + ♂ = ♥
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