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Yes, here it is, finally - the Relived Turnabouts series thread~! It's been a long time coming, and I really can't say why it's taken so long to get this thread up, it was supposed to be posted months ago, but things get in the way, you know how it goes... but work on Redeemer has finally officially started, and as I've long-since said, that coincides with the series thread. It's finally here~

I'm not so good with synopsis', so for now, the future cases only have "-Coming Soon-" to them. Don't worry though, I plan on fixing that. Hopefully I can get someone to help me out with them... :cute:

From the Escape thread: The main story arc is that there's a massive prison break that lets loose a number of the most vile murderers ever known - of course, most of which being ones Phoenix has had run-ins with. As the player, you must both catch the escapees, and find the people responsible for the prison break. (And, of course, help those wrongly accused of it!)

For the record, the story is set very soon after the end of Trials and Tribulations, of which their are some spoilers.


Prologue - Escape From The Turnabout



Spoiler : Original Post :
My debut trial here. This is something I started to try and see how this system worked, and ended up finishing.

I should note that this is a recreation of the opening write-up from a Phoenix Wright Mafia Game that I shall soon be modding. If the testimonies seem lacking, it's mainly because of that - the trial was mainly done just to show people how trials would look in-game. But, as it was, it was WAAAAAAAAAY longer than most write-ups to begin with, so it wasn't really in the cards to add much more to the trial.

Having said that, I did add a little more content (such as having to answer a few questions, and an extra piece of evidence that Phoenix didn't have to present in the write-up) for the sake of this trial, but still..just, keep in mind, it's mainly just to set the story.

And yes, I do plan on making this the beginning of a series. If it seems kind of easy, well, it's the first of said series, so it's kinda supposed to be.. :P

http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=15159

The main story arc is that there's a massive prison break that lets loose a number of the most vile murderers ever known - of course, most of which being ones Phoenix has had run-ins with. As the player, you must both catch the escapees, and find the people responsible for the prison break. (And, of course, help those wrongly accused of it!)

For the record, the story is set very soon after the end of Trials and Tribulations, of which their are some spoilers.

Feel free to tell me of any mistakes that I've made. For instance, some things I could use help with - a lot of the time, when I use the skyblue *thinking* text, it runs right through it on the the read-through..if you know what I'm saying. I don't know why. It's only, like, half the time, it does this. I don't change the text speed so..I'm not really sure why it does that.

Gotta say - I had a lot of fun making this, the system was a lot easier to use than I thought it would be. :D


Spoiler : Walkthrough :
Press on "It was a very nice visit. We spoke for quite a while... I ended up losing track of the time."
Press on "I entered the building at around 9:30, and stayed until about 12:20."

Press on "I didn't want to talk about it because... it's, well it's... kind of embarrassing."
Press on "Well, you see, I... tend to believe things that are told to me, when they aren't... normal."

Choose "Add book to Court Record"

Present "Broken Shovel"

Present "Book of Mysteries"

Choose "The Location of the treasure"

Present "Crime Report"

Present "Smoke Grenade"

Episode 1 - Turnabout Bloodlines



Spoiler : Original Post :
Part 1 Notes:

Two days short of a full month after work on it started - Turnabout Bloodlines, Part 1 is now complete!

Things of note:

Currently at 1980 frames... so, it's, y'know, fairly long. :XD:

I'm not entirely sure if I'm the first person to use the prosecutor that I picked, but I haven't seen them used yet, so... it'd be real cool if I was the first! :D

Oh, and keep on the look out for Examination Easter Eggs™! Even the "nothing of note here" frames have little jokes in them...

And now, the spoiler stuff;

Jacques Portsman's Full Theme; "I Came To Play" by Downstait

Star Atmey's Theme; which is a mash-up of "Whatchu Want" by the Beastie Boys and "Man With A Plan" by Jim Johnston, and was composed by KayfabeMashUpz of YouTube.

This trial has a lot of firsts in it for me. My first investigation, my first attempt at psyche locks, and my first use of variables.

It also contains a custom background that I made, in the Upper Deck of the Court Gallery. It came out okay, I think... good enough to be in the trial, anyway. :larry: Nobody answered my request of it, so I was just like, "Oh what the hell, I've got Photofiltre". :awesome:

Took me a bit to figure out juuuust what prosecutor I wanted to put in for this case. Godot is imprisoned at the time, so that doesn't work. It's too important for Payne. Edgeworth trying to convict Franzi didn't work for me, and after he pretty much lost on purpose to save Maya in the first case, I didn't want a repeat of that. And for fairly obvious reasons, it couldn't be Franziska... :cute:

Portsman seemed like a good alternative, and seemed to me like a potentially interesting choice. Hopefully that's something some of you will agree with me on. :larry:

Pt. 2 Notes: Weighing in at a staggering 2083 frames, and hailing from...





...Princeton, New Jersey, ladies and gentlemen, please welcome to AAO, the one and only Chapter 2 of Turnabout Bloodlines! (...Because if there were other Chapter 2's to the same trial, that'd be kind of weird.)

The past slowly creeps it's way into the present, in more ways than one, as the trial focused around an in-court murder continues~!

There's not much I really want to give away about this trial part. One thing I want you to keep in mind, though - there are a lot of mergings used, that involve pause tags. That's pretty much my style to use those a lot. When people speed through text, on these frames, occasionally errors will occur where the first letter of the first frame to be merged is all of it that you see, or other such things. As a bit of a precaution, I ask people to be careful not to overdo it. I'm not trying to force you to do it any certain way of course, you should play it at your own pace. Just, felt like it'd be nice to keep that in mind, as I'd hate for text to be skipped over like that. Especially if it causes you to miss something important... :wink:

Redd White's theme; which is a mash-up of "Here Comes The Money" by Naughty By Nature, and "It's All About The Money" by Jimmy Hart and J.J. Maguire. It was mixed by RavenCyarm of YouTube.


Part 3 notes:

AAAAAAAH! After six months! After blown hard drives! After moving back and forth from computers! After reaching a once-thought-impossible 5325 Frames! After breaking the editor twice! After getting that hangnail! FINALLY! It is here! The third and final part of Turnabout Bloodlines!

One special feature of this case: Throughout it, there are alternate present conversations as Easter Eggs, three of them to be precise. And if you get all of them, and finish the trial, there's a little unlockable scene to be found... :cute:

This is easily the biggest serious trial part I've ever done. Unas actually had to up the frame limit twice, just to make room for it, for Christ's sakes! :awesome:

And I must say, I really never expected this to be so well received. I mean, I thought they'd like it, but "best trial of the year so far"? "One of the best complete cases on the site"? "The next Scapegoat"?! Honestly, I'm not sure that it deserves such high praise... but perhaps you should just find that out for yourself? :cute:

And, for those that need it, a Walkthrough;


Spoiler : Walkthrough :
Part 1

--- Investigation ---

Move: Detention Center

Talk: Murder
Talk: Your Request
Talk: Suspicion
Talk: Guilty?

Choose: I'll take the case! (Note: It doesn't actually make much of a difference.)

Move: Courthouse

Talk: The Investigation
Talk: Progress
Talk: The Case
Talk: Gumshoe

Move: Hallway

Present: Letter of Permission (Or don't, it doesn't matter... :P )

Talk: Who are you?
Talk: Your Father
Talk: Relation To Crime

Move: Defendant Lobby

Talk: Why you're here
Talk: Your Reaction
Talk: Your case
Talk: Seen Anyone?

Move: Hallway
Move: Courtroom Gallery - Upper Deck

Examine: Ring on floor

Talk: Who You Are
Talk: Why You're Here
Talk: This Case
Present: Ring/Star's Bling (Whichever one you currently have, they both work)

Move: Hallway

Move: Courthouse Lobby
Present: Grace's Profile

Move: Hallway
Present: Ring

Talk: Click Magatama symbol
Present: Star's "Bling"
Present: Grace Atmey's profile
Talk: Promise?


--- Trial ---

On the statement, "... and the shot came from the gallery, the same one from which the crime scene photo was taken." Present: Crime Scene Photo
Click: The Chalk Outline

Choose: Yes
Present: Star Atmey

On the statement, "You want to know where I was that night? At my house. My sister and butler can vouch for that." Present: Star's "Bling"
Press "Know what, mang? You people are sick, trying to point the finger at me for this thing."
On the statement, "I had no reason to want my dad dead. At all. AT ALL! You understand?" Present: Luke Atmey's Will

Press "It was a little dark, but... I could tell that it was a woman! And she was carrying what looked like a rifle!"
Choose "What else was she carrying?"
On the statement, "She was holding the rifle in one hand, and a big whip in the other!" Present: Franziska's Whip

Choose: Of course she did!
Present: Grace Atmey's Profile


Part 2

--- Investigation ---

Move to the Detention Center

Talk: Court Today
Talk: Prosecutor Portsman
Talk: This Case

Move to Criminal Affairs

Talk: Franziska
Talk: The Atmey Siblings
Talk: The Atmey Family Mansion

Move to Atmey Family Mansion

Talk: The Atmeys
Talk: Carmen Atmey

Move to Grace's Room

Examine: Paper sticking out of drawer

Talk: Court Today
Present: Star Atmey's Profile
Talk: Seven Years Ago
Talk: Your Father

Move to Atmey Family Mansion

Talk: Luke's Past Occupations


--- Trial ---

- Choose "I'll prove it with evidence".
- Present Luke Atmey's History of Occupations.

- Redd White's Testimonies -

- Press on "So there I was, just minding my own business in the court gallery's upper deck."
- Choose "You wouldn't be able to see across the decks!"
- Choose "Very important"
- Press on "Using my splendiferous binoculars, I was able to see from my deck, to the opposite one."
- Choose "Where was your seat?"
- Present Upper Deck Seating Chart, on "And what should I see... but our very own defendant holding a sniper rifle!"

- Click on one of the two pillars at the center of the pews.

- Present Bullet on "All the same, I still saw her, plain as day, leaving the courthouse with that sniper rifle in her hands."

Part 3

- Select 'Disagree'

- Present Grace Atmey's profile

- Present Seating Chart

- Present Newspaper Article

- Present Gumshoe's Profile (EASTER EGG: You can also present Grace or Star's profiles, for a different conversation. You do get penalized, but not nearly as much. Though I should note that the convos for the two siblings are pretty much the exact same as one another.)

- Dick Gumshoe's Testimony -

- Present Accident Report at "The investigation was intense - and we found absolutely no signs of sabotage!" OR "The exact cause of the crash is still unknown - though we know it involved the engine failing." (They lead to the same thing.)
- Select 'Page 3'
- Click the snipped wire
- Press "There was... seemingly nothing she could've done to save herself."
- Select "She couldn't have escaped".
- Present Newspaper Article at "She had no chance to escape the car before or after the accident."
- Click the "less than an hour later" line.
- Present Carmen's Autopsy Report at "We believe that Carmen Atmey herself accidentally stepped on the wire - causing it to break."
- Present Accident Report at "The investigation was intense - and we found absolutely no signs of sabotage!"
- Select 'Page 3'
- Click the hole

- Select 'Both theories are correct'

- Present Newspaper Article

- Click the part about the life insurance policy.

- Present Jacques Portsman's Profile

- Select "...after the murder of Kane Bullard."

- Star Atmey's 2nd Testimony -

- Press "...So you mind telling me why the hell calling me again was so very necessary?!"
- Select 'Very much so'
- Present Upper Deck - Seating Chart at "For Christ's sakes, I haven't even done anything suspicious!"
- Click on the F.

(EASTER EGG: Press "...so I... I visited the trial that day, s-so that I could see him again...", Select 'Press further', then present Luke Atmey's Will at "Star and father's relationship has soured a bit since his conviction, so he didn't go with me." for an alternate conversation. No penalties.)

- Grace Atmey's 2nd Testimony -

- Press "Afterwards, I printed out and labeled the ch-chart... by myself. Star had nothing to do with it."
- Select 'Press further'.
- Select 'Dammned straight!'.
- Present Franziska's profile.
- Present Franziska's Whip.

- Select 'I'll prove it with testimony'

- Present Grace Atmey's profile

- Select 'Let her off easy'

- Present Star Atmey's profile.

- Star Atmey's 3rd Testimony -

- Press "We watched the whole trial, and then we saw dad come up to the stand and testify..."
- Select "Flash of light"
- Press "I distinctly remember seeing this bright light shine off'a my pops..."
- Present Crime Scene Photo at "I wasn't in the stands the shot came from, though - I was in the ones on the other side."

- Present Bellboy's profile (EASTER EGG: Present Luke Atmey's Will for an alternate conversation - no penalties)

- Present Franziska's Whip

(EASTER EGG: If you get all three of the alternative conversations above, and then complete the trial, you're rewarded with a secret scene that foreshadows the future of the series...)



Episode 2 - Turnabout Redeemer

Chapter 1 - The Reapers



Spoiler : Walkthrough :
Part 1
Move: Detention Center

Talk: Godot
Talk: Why you were out
Talk: The Reapers
Talk: Godot's Mission
Talk: The Murder
Talk: One last thing...

Move: BlueCorp - Side
Move: BlueCorp - Back

Talk: Maggey
Talk: The Case
Talk: Grand Theft Auto

Move: BlueCorp - Side

Move: Police HQ - Front
Talk: Gumshoe
Talk: The Case
Present: Grand Theft Auto Report
Talk: Luminol
Present: Luminol Spray
Click: A part of the wall, just to the left of the right column, opposite the Blue Badger. It's towards the middle. Just spray up and down around that area and you'll find it.

Move: Prosecutor's Office - Front Desk
Examine: Knifeset on Desk

Move: Prosecutor's Office - 12th Floor Hallway

Move: Edgeworth's Office
Talk: This Case
Talk: Last Time We Met
Talk: Earlier Trial

Move: Prosecutor's Office - 12th Floor Hallway

Move: Portsman's Office
Talk: Portsman
Talk: Current Case
Choose: Why did you have the key?

Move: Prosecutor's Office - 12th Floor Hallway

Move: Edgeworth's Office
Examine: King Of Prosecutor's Trophy on couch

Move: Prosecutor's Office - 12th Floor Hallway

Move: Portsman's Office
Present: King Of Prosecutor's Trophy

Move: Prosecutor's Office - 12th Floor Hallway

Move: Chief Prosecutor's Office
Talk: Fiscal
Talk: This Case
Present: Godot's Cellphone
Present: Grand Theft Auto Report

Move: Wright and Co. Law Offices (Or anywhere else that you can get to the BlueCorp - Side location from)
Move: BlueCorp - Side

Move: BlueCorp - Inside
Talk: April
Talk: The Murder
Examine: Treadmarks on the road in the window

Move: BlueCorp - Side

Move: BlueCorp - Back
Talk: Larry
Talk: The Murder
Click: Psyche-Lock Button
Present: Larry Butz's Profile
Present: Maggey Byrde's Profile
Present: April May's Profile
Talk: Night of the Murder

Move: BlueCorp - Side
Move: BlueCorp - Inside
Present: Larry's Love Letter
Move: BlueCorp - Side

Part 2

-- Gumshoe's Testimonies --
Present Injury Report at "We believe both the killer and the thief... to be Godot."
Press "It was stolen from the Police Department Evidence Room on the night of the murder."
Present Theft Report at "It was stolen from the Police Department Evidence Room on the night of the murder." OR "We believe both the killer and the thief... to be Godot." They both lead to the same thing.

Present Autopsy Report at "Sorry pal, but it's practically guaranteed that Godot is the one that killed White with a single stab!"

Present Crime Scene Photo
Click on the blood on the wall
Select "The Swordcane was still in"

-- Godot's Testimonies --
Press all
Present Godot's Bloodstain on "The theft was the only thing that happened at the Police Department."

Present Crime Scene Photo on "I could see myself continuing to attack him during that blur."
Click on White's eyes

Select "State of the Victim (Before the stabbing)"

Press all - click "Press Further" on "I'm pretty sure that he saw me...", click "Back Off" on the other two that ask you for this.

Select "White was already dead when Godot stabbed him"
Present Godot's Profile

Part 3

Move: Detention Center
Talk: Court Today
Talk: Edgeworth
Present: Autopsy Report
Present: Godot's Bloodstain/Injury Report
Present: Swordcane/Theft Report
Talk: "The Redeemer"

Move: BlueCorp - Side
Move: BlueCorp - Back

Talk: Maggey
Talk: Not Supposed To Be Here

Move: BlueCorp - Side
Move: BlueCorp - Front Office

Talk: BlueCorp
Talk: The Case
Click: Magatama Button
Present: Treadmarks
Select: "...left before the murder, but then came back"
Present: Larry Butz's Profile
Select: You moved the body!
Select: ...to keep from becoming a suspect.
Present: April May's Profile
Talk: What Really Happened
Present: Larry Butz's Profile

Move: BlueCorp - Side
Move: Tiger's Ladders - Outside
Move: Tiger's Ladders - Inside

Talk: Mission Of Love
Talk: Tiger's Ladders
Talk: Please Leave!

Examine: Bloody Cloth on floor
Examine: Car

Move: Tiger's Ladders - Outside
Move: Police Headquarters - Entrance

Talk: Godot's Bloodstain
Talk: Court Today
Talk: Maggey's Car
Present: Bloody Cloth

Move: Prosecutor's Office - Front Desk
Move: Prosecutor's Office - 12th Floor Hallway
Move: Prosecutor's Office - Edgeworth's Office

Talk: Edgeworth
Talk: Court Today
Talk: Godot's Guilt
Talk: Why We're Here
Present: Grand Theft Auto Report

Move: Prosecutor's Office - 12th Floor Hallway
Move: Chief Prosecutor's Office

Examine: Painting on Wall
Examine: Safe
Type: 3326

Move: Prosecutor's Office - Front Desk
Move: Police Headquarters - Entrance
Move: Criminal Affairs
Talk: Big News

Move: Police Headquarters - Entrance
Talk: Why You're Here
Talk: Furio


Part 4

Select: "...have something to present"
Present: Mysterious Car
Select: "...is the murder weapon."
Present: Treadmarks

Press: "I, um... got out of my car. I left it on, and made sure all the doors were unlocked."
Present: Grand Theft Auto Report at "I didn't have any reason for doing that. It's my own fault."
Press: "Now I'm telling the truth - because I can't let him be suspected for something he didn't do."
Present: Dean Fiscal's Profile
Select: "...he'd get you fired."

Select: "I don't believe it."
Present: RE-4 Knife
Present: Prosecutor's Office Knifeset

Present: Fiscal's Evidence at "It wasn't the knife I sent her to get. I brought the actual evidence I sent her for with me today."
Present: Grand Theft Auto Report at "I sent her to retrieve the evidence minutes after midnight."
Present: Treadmarks at "Her report is completely unreliable. It wasn't 10:30. That's a complete fabrication."
Present: April May's Profile AND the Autopsy Report

Press: All statements, Select: Not to present evidence on all of them

Select: I give up.
Select: Because you're an accomplice to murder.
Select: To kill someone else!
Present: Godot's profile
Present: Godot's Bloodstain
Present: Morgan Fey's profile
Present: Theft Report


Press: "It'd certainly seem that the police would have no way of knowing a crime was being committed there."
Select: Call them
Present: Godot's Cell Phone to "Sure, I COULD'VE called the police, but obviously I didn't. You mind telling me why...?"

Present: Furio Tigre's Profile
Present: Bloody Cloth


Part 5

- Present: Bloody Cloth at "...and then wiped the blood up himself. Dere, how does that grab ya? Dat good?"
- Present: Swordcane at "Godot musta been wearing gloves at da time. Dat explains the lack of prints on da cloth."
- Select "Bluff my ass off"

- Present: Maggey's Car at "Lemme ask ya - just how was I supposed to GET to the Police HQ?"
- Select: The Trunk
- Present: Bloody Bandage

- Select: No evidence
- Present: Swordcane
- Present: Redd White's Profile

- Present: Larry's Love Letter at "How do we REALLY know that dat bandage was wedged in the car door?" (Yes, really~)
- Select: ...is a piece of your bandage.

- Present: Maggey Byrde's profile at "I mean, why would I? Doing dat don't really help me none, now do it?"
- Select: The cause of death.
- Present: RE-4 Knife
- Select: ...would prosecute the case.

- Press: "So I... I ran. I'm really sorry, I know I shouldn't 'a done dat. I just... panicked..."
- Select: I can
- Present: Maggey's Car
- Select: The car's location

- Present: Godot's Profile at "After that, dere's no way he coulda stabbed me. Dat arm wouldn't 'a been strong enough."

- Present: Redd White's Baillist


EASTER EGG: - Present: Swordcane (Don't worry, you won't get penalized, Judge Fudge kinda Fudges on the whole full penalty thing in the convo... and this shall unlock the secret scene!)
- Present: Reaper's Calling Card


Present: Reaper's Calling Card/Redd White's Baillist


Episode 3 - Turnabout Monster

- Coming Soon -


Episode 4 - Coming of Age, and Turnabout

- Coming Soon -


Episode 5 - Turnabout Dawn

- Coming Soon -

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Star Atmey
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Son of Luke and Carmen Atmey, and brother to Grace. A bit of a rebel without a cause, he's got quite the temper and isn't afraid to shout at anyone who even remotely crosses him. Nonetheless, he can be quite good-hearted, and truly cares for his sister. He can also be pretty clever when he's calm - it's just that being calm is kind of a rare occurrence for him...

Affectionate Nickname: Commonly refers to his sister as 'Gracie'.
Catch Phrase: "Shut the hell up!"
Even Bad Boys Love Their Mamas: And sisters too!
Expy: In Part 1 of Bloodlines, he really was too much like Wocky. I attempted to tone this down in his Part 3 appearance.
Hair-Trigger Temper
Heartwarming Orphan: They do have their moments...
Hot Blooded: Can snap at you at the drop of a hat.
Spoiler : Turnabout Bloodlines :

Jerk With A Heart Of Gold: He's pretty damned brash to people he isn't close to, but he sure does love his little sister.
Leitmotif: "I'm A Man With A Plan, So What'cha Want"
Lonely Rich Kid/Friendless Background: I don't think this was actually went into, but after their father was convicted of murder, all of the other kids at school started avoiding the Atmey siblings, mainly for fear that murder may run in the family. As a result, they really only have each other and their Bellboy - sorry, their butler - for friends.
Spoiler : Turnabout Bloodlines :
Manly Tears: During the end of Turnabout Bloodlines, his tearful speech is pretty much handled this way.

Meaningful Name/Punny Name: A pun off of "stare at me".
Pretty Fly For A White Guy: Had this at first, though it was never really at Wocky's level. Pretty much went away by Part 3.
Spoiler : Turnabout Bloodlines :

Wise Beyond Their Years: Somewhat surprisingly, he shows some signs of this. When he's calm atleast, he's pretty good with plans and the like.
Theme Naming: Like his father and sister, his namepun is a variation of "look at me".
Verbal Tic: Likes saying "G" and "Mang" quite a bit.
Spoiler : Turnabout Bloodlines, Turnabout Redeemer :
Your Days Are Numbered: Part 1 of Turnabout Redeemer confirms that he's been convicted for the murder of his father, and, unfortunately, is set to be executed pretty soon.



Grace Atmey
(Gray-ss At-me)
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Daughter of Luke and Carmen Atmey, and sister to Star. A quiet and shy girl that's always extremely careful not to come across as mean or rude. This makes her stand out a bit from Luke and Star, who, uh... don't care about that quite as much. It's said that she gets it from her mother.

Affectionate Nickname: Star likes to call her 'Gracie'.
Apologises A Lot: Whenever she gets angry with you, anyway.
Bad Liar: Mainly due to a lack of experience. If you press the first - I believe - statement of her first testimony, she accidentally tells you which upper deck she actually sat in, which completely contradicts the rest of her testimony, though this situation is quickly waved off by Portsman as her simply being mistaken due to her nervousness.
**Phoenix Wright: I've gotta hand it to you, Grace. It was quite clever of you, to refrain from revealing your last name. Especially considering, judging by how you answered to my "were you in the opposite gallery" query, that you aren't a very experienced liar.
Spoiler : Turnabout Bloodlines :
B!tch In Sheep's Clothing: Wholly subverted. I did attempt to get people to suspect this was in play, like by noting how these types always show up in Case 2's - Bloodlines was one at the time~ - making her seem to good to be true, or by giving her a version of Dahlia frickin' Hawthorne's theme song, but no, she's quite genuine.

The Cutie: Her having Alita Tiala's sprites and only using her smiling or concerned poses was the first step to this. Having her be so very overly-sweet and gentle that
Spoiler : Turnabout Bloodlines :
even when she's snapping at you for accusing her father of killing her mother,
she STILL stops herself to make sure she's not being too mean is the second.
Spoiler : Turnabout Bloodlines :
**Break The Cutie: She spends most of the latter half of Part 3 of Bloodlines crying, due to her overwhelming situation of learning what really happened to her mother, as well as at the thought that her own brother may have killed her father.

Dark And Troubled Past: Still developing one as we speak...
Heartwarming Orphan: They do have their moments...
The Ingenue: Very innocent and unassuming.
Leitmotif: This version of Dahlia Hawthorne's theme.
Lonely Rich Kid/Friendless Background: I don't think this was actually went into, but after their father was convicted of murder, all of the other kids at school started avoiding the Atmey siblings, mainly for fear that murder may run in the family. As a result, they really only have each other and their Bellboy - sorry, their butler - for friends.
Meaningful Name/Punny Name: A pun off of "gaze at me".
Nice Gal: Keep in mind that she spends most of the case at odds with you. Despite this, she thinks it's unfair when the gallery starts ganging up on you - only to also stop and wonder if it's rude to get on to them for this, considering they're doing it in support of her - constantly stops herself and apologizes when she thinks she's being too mean, despite the fact that she never even comes close to doing that, and really doesn't like it when you're threatened with a penalty that she believes is too harsh. A penalty that was only going to be administered in the event that you badger her, due to her frailty, I might add.
The Quiet One
Shrinking Violet: Typically very quiet and gentle.
Theme Naming: Like her father and brother, her namepun is a variation of "look at me".
Verbal Tic: Whenever she's particularly unsure of herself, she has a habit of letting her words just kind of fade away into silence...
Wide-Eyed Idealist
The Woobie: Your Milage May Vary, of course, but I'm definitely going for it, so...


Carmen Atmey
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Wife of Luke, and mother of Star and Grace Atmey. It's said that she was a kind-hearted soul. Unfortunately, she died in a tragic car accident years before we meet her children.

Absurdly Youthful Mother: Borderline example. The respective ages puts her at around 17 at the time of Star's birth.
Death By Origin Story: In a way.
Disposable Woman
Every Car Is A Pinto: Subverted - her car did not, in fact, explode after falling off the cliff. This didn't really help her much, though...
** Phoenix Wright: (I guess not every car is a Pinto after all...)
Hot Mom
Leitmotif: The one that the eyeball hates so much. It doubles as both this and the reminiscence music for the accident.
Meaningful Name/Punny Name: A pun off of "comin' at me".
Nice Gal: We only have other people's descriptions to go on here, but everyone talks her up as being exceptionally kind-hearted. Additionally, Grace is noted as taking after her mother, personality-wise.
Posthumous Character: By the time we come into the Atmey sibling's lives, she's already been dead for several years.


Dean Fiscal
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The current Chief Prosecutor of Phoenix Wright's district, and by all accounts, a rather frightening individual. He's obsessed with darkness, to the point to where he makes sure his office is constantly shrouded in it by nailing the drapes over the windows so that not a single speck of light could come in from them. Somehow, he's able to see perfectly in the dark. He's even somehow taught himself to read black words on black paper, in pitch blackness!

Anime Hair: Added by his spriter, for some reason.
Black Magic: Examining his bookcase shows a plethora of grim books, one of which being a book of dark magical spells and curses. Maya and Pearl note that they can feel a dark aura when they're around him, and when he steps into a room, it instantly gets colder. (Like an Anti-Gant.)
Bunny Ears Lawyer: Albeit a less silly example than is typical in this franchise - there's no reason at all to think he tones down his darkness obsession while prosecuting cases.
Spoiler : Redeemer Part 4 and 5 :
The Chessmaster: Set up several events in a plan that, had it worked, would've accomplished three huge things for him. 1. It would've gotten rid of Godot. 2. It would've framed Maggey for his murder. And 3. It would've set her up to look like the one that aided Morgan rather than Fiscal. He's also particularly good at predicting his enemies' move and setting traps for them, as was naturally shown in his testimonies, most notably the first. He was even able to coach Furio Tigre on what to do, in the event that he got called up to take the stand, to the point to where he started to seem like a Magnificent Bastard. If it weren't for Furio Tigre failing to kill Godot, running down White, and then accidentally admitting to being a member of the Reapers, he most likely would've won.

Creepy Monotone: Obviously there wasn't much to show this, but I more-or-less envision him speaking with this - when he's not breaking the sound barrier with his screams, that is...
Dark Is Not Evil: He believes that this much is true, atleast. Whether or not it actually applies to him is yet to be seen...
Spoiler : :
Aaaand it does not. Not at all. Of course, if you'd ask him, he'd tell you it's not really the darkness that makes him evil, and he doesn't make any use of the dark in his plans...

Death Glare
Evil Is Deathly Cold: Rooms have a tendency to get exceedingly cold when he walks into them, for seemingly no reason other than this.
Evil Sounds Deep: Noted by Phoenix as having a rather frightening and deep voice.
Hell Is That Noise: His positively delightful custom scream SFX, which was created by taking the standard Shouting SFX, putting it into Windows Movie Maker and editing it to raise it's volume up to it's peak.
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The Man Behind The Man: Oh so very much this to Furio.

Spoiler : Turnabout Redeemer :
Magnificent Bastard: See The Chessmaster above.

Meaningful Name: 'Dean' is a synonym for 'chief', and 'Fiscal' is a Spanish word for 'prosecutor'. Guess what his occupation is...
Leitmotif: "Cell Arrives"
Spoiler : Turnabout Redeemer Part 4 and 5 :
Obviously Evil: Really doesn't try to hide it, does he?

"The Reason You Suck" Speech/Hannibal Lecture: Likes to hand these out, in the form of morbid rants or stories, that he then relates to you in a way that amounts to "You're a pitiful person that should give up on both this, and your life."
Red Baron: The Dean Of The Dark and/or The Dean Of Darkness.
Spoiler : Turnabout Redeemer :
Red Oni, Blue Oni: Makes for a good Blue Oni to Furio Tigre's Red.

Sinister Scythe: Has a necklace in the shape of one. YES, IT COUNTS.
Slasher Smile: The only kind he ever shows.
The Stoic: Occasionally he'll crack a villainous smile or a grimace of unending rage, but most of the time, he's completely expressionless.
Tome Of Eldritch Lore: Owns a few of these. See Black Magic above.
** Phoenix Wright: What, no necronomicon?!

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Glad to see that it's finally up! (Sure took ya long enough. :awesome:) Can't wait to play Redeemer.

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Glad to see that it's finally up! (Sure took ya long enough. :awesome:) Can't wait to play Redeemer.


I can't wait to finish it~

What do you think of the chapter titles I gave for the Bloodlines parts, by the way? Dunno why I felt like doing that, but seemed like it could be cool. Kinda helps set them apart from each other, y'know?

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We should like merge all the threads together because this amazing series needs more hype

It's an insult to all things that represent quality that this hasn't surpassed the Ace Prosecutor thread

Also, I told Zeel I'd try to write up synopsises (Is there even a pluralfor the word?) for the series to help hype it up, we'll see if those wind up being used...

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Yes, that's exactly correct. The purpose of the test is to test whether you have an understanding of the material, not if you've simply memorized it and can regurgitate it. In fact, I'm sure the reason he put the 'trick questions' on the test was in order to see who understood the material and was paying attention and who was simply memorizing facts without taking the time and effort to actually understand them.


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Zeel1™ wrote:
I can't wait to finish it~

What do you think of the chapter titles I gave for the Bloodlines parts, by the way? Dunno why I felt like doing that, but seemed like it could be cool. Kinda helps set them apart from each other, y'know?

Ah, yes, I noticed those! I think they add quite a nice touch.

...someone will have to remind me why Chapter 2's is 'White-Out', though. :P

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I'd rather keep the threads the way they are. I like to leave the past untouched so people can look back and see it later.

Gonna be keeping track of the framecount for Redeemer, as has become standard fare for me~

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Zeel1™ wrote:
I can't wait to finish it~

What do you think of the chapter titles I gave for the Bloodlines parts, by the way? Dunno why I felt like doing that, but seemed like it could be cool. Kinda helps set them apart from each other, y'know?

Ah, yes, I noticed those! I think they add quite a nice touch.

...someone will have to remind me why Chapter 2's is 'White-Out', though. :P


Spoiler : :
Redd White plays a big role in it.

And he's out... of prison. :awesome:

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Ba... dum... tish... :P

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Ba... dum... tish... :P


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Ya, I'm clever like that~ :awesome:

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Oh hell yeah Relived Turnabouts!
I'm glad to see it finally has a topic. Now I can check it every 5 minutes.
Speaking of things to check, glad to see Redeemer finally has a frame count. Are you aiming for it to be huge like Part 3 of Bloodlines, or quicker like Parts 1 and 2?

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Old box-art is old. ~_~
(It could seriously do with new artwork, and a stronger gradient. Hmm... :wink: )

Welcome back, and it's good to see that TRT has its own series thread now. No more complaining from Meph. :XD:

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Hooray! Finally! :D

Now I can close all of the other showcases.

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Oh hell yeah Relived Turnabouts!
I'm glad to see it finally has a topic. Now I can check it every 5 minutes.
Speaking of things to check, glad to see Redeemer finally has a frame count. Are you aiming for it to be huge like Part 3 of Bloodlines, or quicker like Parts 1 and 2?


Overall, it should probably end up being longer than Bloodlines. I'll try and avoid another Part 3-sized trial part, but I can't really make any promises - I'm not really good with predicting this stuff. :awesome:

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Old box-art is old. ~_~
(It could seriously do with new artwork, and a stronger gradient. Hmm... :wink: )

Welcome back, and it's good to see that TRT has its own series thread now. No more complaining from Meph. :XD:


It's fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine~

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Hooray! Finally! :D

Now I can close all of the other showcases.


Man, you were just grinding your (figurative, because he's an eyeball) teeth, waiting for the chance to do that, weren't you?

...Douche. :awesome:

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And now it's time... for the very first series of meaningless screenshots~! (Meaningless as in they tell you nothing about the case, not meaningless as in, y'know, fake.)

Believe it or not, this convo was actually copied verbatim from a Xat chat I had with Koopa;

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Meph wrote:
Hooray! Finally! :D

Now I can close all of the other showcases.


Man, you were just grinding your (figurative, because he's an eyeball) teeth, waiting for the chance to do that, weren't you?

...Douche. :awesome:

You know that is makes me sweat (figuratively speaking) when the forums are unorganised. :P

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