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★ Trial Series: PWAA Justice and Truth (New feature shown!) 

On a scale of 1 to 10 (10 being the best rating), how do you rate Turnabout Redemption?
10 42%  42%  [ 11 ]
9 12%  12%  [ 3 ]
8 8%  8%  [ 2 ]
7 23%  23%  [ 6 ]
6 8%  8%  [ 2 ]
5 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
4 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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2 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
1 8%  8%  [ 2 ]
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★ Trial Series: PWAA Justice and Truth (New feature shown!) 
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Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney: Justice and Truth
(Now a featured series! Thank you, Meph!)


Info put in spoiler tabs for ease of viewing.

Mock cover done by the magnificent Tap! :D (Final cover!)


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Warning: Contains spoilers for all Ace Attorney games, including Investigations.

Hints: Please give not so hard but not so easy hints for our fellow players who are stuck.

Walkthrough: Available by request.



Updates:

Prologue done
1-1 Done
1-2 Done
1-3 Done
February 14th, 2011: GyakutenWiki page added here.


Plot:

Spoiler : Plot, put in spoiler tag to avoid spoiling others that haven't played the games :
Apollo Justice has finally trounced Kristoph Gavin, ending his cruel regime of lies and deceit. Only a few days have passed, and the same question lingers in his mind: what is the law? What extent does it reach? Is the law truly limited to the people, and not those in power? What role does justice play? It is for this purpose that he has called upon his turnabout mentor, Phoenix Wright, to ask his opinion. Phoenix explains his views, and reminisces about his harshest trials. And it is here where he decides to "tell" his story to Apollo... about justice and truth. What is truth? What is lie? What is secret? And what is justice? Find out in this epic tale of objections, contradictions, and truth!


Trailer:

Planned and possible, but not confirmed. Unlike others, it will be a full-fledged video, very akin to an anime opening, and will be posted on YouTube. This is not confirmed, however. Just desired on my part.


Spoiler : What you can expect in this series :
What you can expect in this series:


    Variety and breaking the norm. For example, rather than having Winston Payne as the first prosecutor, you face Franziska von Karma instead. And your opponent won't necessarily be one prosecutor!

    Unexpected defendants, witnesses and such. Who knows what surprises may come your way!

    Expansion on the characters', um, character. Get to know and experience them closer than before!

    An engaging plot, different killing methods and amusing moments. What's an Ace Attorney game without references and hilarity?! :calisto:

    An approach to canon, rather than a fanfic-esque orientation!

    Best musical selections from all games! May or may not include remixes.


Spoiler : Prologue (COMPLETED) :
Below is a link to the Prologue. It's not playable, just an introduction to the game. All you can do is look at profiles and click through the text. But if you want to understand the true nature of the series, I recommend taking a look at it.

Prologue = Complete!


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Case 1: Turnabout Redemption

Spoiler : (COMPLETED) :
A very bizarre murder has taken place in the city's Detention Center. Morris Fashoff... the faceless victim. His identity... stolen away, burned in the deepest orifices of obscurity. The culprit... spirited away, like the best thief. And at the center, a face Phoenix never expected to see again. With Franziska von Karma as his opponent once more, can he truly find the culprit, and save the day... and be just in time for burgers?!

(Total frames: 775)

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(Total frames: 671)

Total frame count combined: 2049 frames!


Case 2: Turnabout Darkness

Spoiler : Plot :
Currently in the works.


Case 3: Turnabout Epitaph (lol Umineko)

Spoiler : Plot :
Phoenix Wright and Miles Edgeworth face what should probably be the most frightening of their case: the most undesirable person on the planet as the defendant! And something has happened to a certain officer of the law... but what?! And since when is this man or woman so formidable?! Featuring the return of the Skye sisters!


Case 4: Turnabout Dramatis Personae

Spoiler : Plot :
Not yet planned, but I can tell you this: the defense and prosecution are Apollo Justice and Klavier Gavin! That's right: an AJ universe case!


Case 5: Turnabout Nightmares
Spoiler : Plot :
TOP SECRET.


Case 6: Not sure if I'll make one.

A personal request:

All comments and thoughts are appreciated! However, I will ask that if you have critique of any kind, be gentle and nice. I'd rather not say why. Thank you!

My purpose is not to compete, or prove myself better than anyone else, or make the best trial ever. I just want to share my things with the community, since I'm doing it mostly for myself. :3 Though if it's featured, it is highly appreciated too.

Thank you so much for reading!

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Spoiler : lol :
Written by an Asperger disorder patient.

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What a narcissistic jerk you are. You made an entire thread about your series? You must obviously think the entire world revolves around you, that you are the greatest writer ever, and that your case is the best one ever made, out of all fan-cases (both on- and off-AAO) and canon cases. I mean, only people who think in such a way and have such feelings go so far as to make a thread about their series. [/sarcasm]

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Gee, there is something strange about that last period in my previous post...

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He was just playing, Ryu, don't worry. He has "sarcasm" at the end of his first post, sized-down. You can see it if you quote it.

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Guys... now you are being douches. He states he has Asperger's, so don't give him any flak.

Ryu, I'm going to give you a review tomorrow, okay?

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Zeel1 wrote:
He was just playing, Ryu, don't worry. He has "sarcasm" at the end of his first post, sized-down. You can see it if you quote it.


...Oh. ^^;; I'm sorry. I'm terrible at sarcasm.

E.D.Revolution wrote:
Guys... now you are being douches. He states he has Asperger's, so don't give him any flak.

Ryu, I'm going to give you a review tomorrow, okay?


Thanks for the support. And no worries, all I ask is that you enjoy the trial. :3

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E.D.Revolution wrote:
Guys... now you are being douches. He states he has Asperger's, so don't give him any flak.

It's what he gets for saying he's not trying to be an arrogant jerk by making this thread and bolding it, when it's completely unnecessary :P

(Sorry if I offended you. It wasn't personal or anything. It's just my style.)

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Ryu Ushiromiya wrote:
Zeel1 wrote:
He was just playing, Ryu, don't worry. He has "sarcasm" at the end of his first post, sized-down. You can see it if you quote it.


...Oh. ^^;; I'm sorry. I'm terrible at sarcasm.


It's an honest mistake. We can just forget that went down. :)

I used to have issues with this a lot - joking around with people that I don't really know, as if they're already friends of mine. It can kind of be an issue, as when people don't know you very well, that can make interpreting the meaning of a forum post harder than it already is. It got this one guy really mad at me once before. I tried to roll with it and try and make it more clear that I'm not serious, but they just seemed to think I was trolling them. Eh...

Nowadays, I save sarcasm for people that I've gotten to know a little better, as they know I wouldn't seriously be trying to insult them or pick a fight.

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I apologize too. As an aspie I SUCK at detecting sarcasm, hence my taking the Internet seriously sometimes. XD But now I know how you work, so I can no longer take you seriously. lD

Like I said, I just followed Mimi Mika's thread as a guide. XD

Zeel1- Thanks... I suddenly feel terrible about this.

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:eureka: SUBJECT CHANGE GO. Enjoy my trial former. XD

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Lol, don't worry, I have a tough time detecting sarcasm myself :P (Both IRL and especially on the interblagg) That's why I included the nifty sarcasm tag :D If you ever see me being a real jerk... Well, I might just be being a jerk. But you should still check my post's code for a sarcasm tag :D



zomg review tiem~

Spoiler : prologue :
-Hmm... Phoenix's and Polly's profiles are a bit short. Another sentence or two for each would be nice.
-The real in-game profiles also have the age and gender for everyone. Not everyone (that is, most people, I think xD) don't actually put it in, but it's a little detail that makes it a bit more canony. Also, if you're going to be time travelling...
-Two Phoenix profiles are a bit weird .__. I think I would like it more if you at least made the profiles a bit longer, so that you could say "Me 7 years ago" in the second profile.
-I noticed von Karma's, Gant's, etc, profiles were all viewable while the game was loading. Here's a way to change it: add two frames to the start of the trial. In the second frame, make it perform the action "Reveal Profile/Evidence" and set it to reveal all those profiles. Then set the timer on the first frame to 1, and make the action "Hide Frame" and tell it to hide the second frame (but you'll need to input the actual frame number, not "2"). If you do this, then the profiles shouldn't ever be visible. (You can also take out the "Hide Profile/Evidence" frame you're using to hide them at the start.)
-Otherwise, neat and interesting!

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OH CRAP. I FORGOT TO HIDE THE PROFILES. XD I SHALL FIX NAO.

Did you see the Trial Former? It's the first part of the first chapter. :3 And thanks.

Edit: Fixed!

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Spoiler : trial former :
-Yay, no way-too-short profiles!
-Personally, I prefer the AAI "unknown person" image to the AAO one. If you wanna switch it, here's a link you can use
-Interesting prologue!! ...Don't tell me the murderer is Redd White xD (Or maybe Luke Atmey...?)
-Ages would solidify this as in a certain year.... Perhaps you left them out on purpose? :wink:
-On the Autopsy Report, it should probably say no fingerprints were found on the skin, and the fingerprints on the victim's fingers were burned off. Also, saying that the culprit burned the "body's head" makes it a little confusing, b/c if his head was burned, why were his fingerprints also burned off? If you just say that he burned just the "body" it would be fine.
-Hmm... Floating-in-air sprites aren't good >_> With a little bit of photoshop and her regular full-body pose, you might be able to get the lower half of her. (IIRC Dahlia had the same problem in the prologue... but she's excusable, since she has no full-body sprites xD)
-1-3 REMINISCENCE THEME YES, BEST ONE IN THE SERIES
-This is really just my personal preference, but... I liked the double-spacing (leaving the second line in the textbox empty) in the prologue, but in actual text... hmm... I think just putting the second line spoken in the second line of the text box is fine enough.
-...Wait, we've met Pearl, but no Magatama?
-"fool" "von Karma" "naturally" ...Perfect :D (and "perfect" :P)
-It should just be "in court" instead of "on the court"
-Why is Phoenix calling Gumshoe.... cute? o.o (My my, what an unusual ship you have here...)
-Wait... Shouldn't the victim be the person whose cell that was? Also, if they have no idea who the victim is, "John Doe" would probably be a more appropriate name in the mean-while (even if it does destroy the pun =\)
-The bullet had fingerprints on it? Now that's... very weird. (What, did the killer stick the bullet in the guy's heart himself?!) (Of course, if the gun had the fingerprints instead of the bullet, that would make a bit more sense...)
-He called himself an agent of the law... ...Luke? .__.
-The "OBJECTION!" bubble doesn't come up for an incorrect objection. Also, I presented the Autopsy Report b/c it says that the victim was stabbed and then shot, but Edgey said he heard a gunshot and then a knife stab. I would switch around the order in Edgey's testimony just to make it more consistent.
-It should be "there are no fingerprints on the phone" instead of "the phone does not present fingerprints"
-It should be "but you insist that it is Edgeworth's!"
-Franzy went from wanting Dee to testify to telling Edgey to testify again awfully quick...
-No face, hair, fingerprints, toe prints... or even dental records. Nice job accounting for all the usual forms of identification :P
-At the very beginning of the second cross-examination there's a blank frame (that you probably meant to set to a 1-centisecond timer but forgot to :P)
-Oi, Phoenix is a bit cursy today. (I could see "CRAP!" I suppose, but I think "jackass" is a bit too far.)
-It looks like you made a common mistake. In the first statement for the second cross-examination, if you ask about the knife, at the end of that conversation it seems you set it to proceed automatically to the frame that's the second statement. However, if you do this, the cross-examination gets screwed up. What you need to do is add a blank frame to the end of the press conversation for the first statement, set the wait timer to 1, and have it proceed directly to that frame instead of the testimony frame. (And you need to do this for any other instances you proceeded directly to a testimony's frame.)
-Why are Dee's fingerprints anywhere? Doesn't she wear gloves?
-A premeditated crime... but wasn't the blackout an accident? :o
-And... more later, sleepy ~_~

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Yays, new trial author!

Ryo, I'll definitely play this later for sure.

(Btw, you spelled Tap's name wrong, you called him magnificent taB instead in the beginning of your OP post xD)


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