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Competition Entry: Turnabout Testimony
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Moltor
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My entry in Meph's September 2010 comedy compPhoenix loses his memory again during a trial and the witnesses behave very strangely. What's going on? PLAY
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| Thu Sep 30, 2010 2:02 pm |
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henke37
Security expert / tools programmer
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Yup, that was a clear gameplay change. Good work there. At least the final testimony was sufficiently difficult.
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Currently working on a trial engine in Flash. I am looking for assistance.
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| Thu Sep 30, 2010 4:03 pm |
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Dypo deLina
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Yeah, I couldn't find any contradictions in the last one at all. I had to think it over, like, OVER 9000 times.  _________________チラセ・マギタ ~Married to Evolina deLuna~ <3
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| Fri Oct 01, 2010 7:26 am |
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Moltor
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Singapore123
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too hard to be funny for me... I can't get though!
_________________viewtopic.php?f=50&t=6352&start=0How I rate trials: Pass: Ace: 91 - 100 points B: 75 - 90 points C: 60 - 74 points Fails: D: 50 - 59 points E: 35 - 49 points Fail: 20 - 34 Ungraded: 1 - 19 The score is the average of: Content, spoilers, grammar, PW/AJ/ME style, and maybe more. (And yes, I keep a very high standard.)
Last edited by Singapore123 on Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Falco120
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I really enjoyed the "press every word" element, it added a nice change to the usual. That being said, I don't think I could call this an all-out comedy, per se. It had some funny parts, but that's pretty much it. You could probably work the "press every word" element into a serious trial, I'd like to see that. The only thing that I really didn't like was the picture for the ladder evidence was quite out of place and looked strange, but that's just a little thing. 
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I object! That was... Objectionable!
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| Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:37 pm |
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Meph
Traitor to the AAO crown
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It was more of a puzzle game than a comedy.
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| Sat Oct 02, 2010 11:53 pm |
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