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[T] Secrets of a Turnabout ○
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Meph
Traitor to the AAO crown
Joined: Mon Nov 10, 2008 10:07 pm Posts: 13188 Location: United Kingdom
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Secrets of a Turnabout Law and order ends today SynopsisThe courthouse has been shaken by an almighty crime. A man who represents the very soul of the law has ironically been killed by a lawbreaker. How could someone die right in front of a courthouse; a place where the law itself dwells? Apollo Justice will have to defend Nathan Harley. It's obvious that Nathan did it. Even Mr Payne believes that this looks to be the easiest case he's ever prosecuted! However, even with the the toughest evidence against Nathan, Apollo knows the truth. There is far more to this case than meets the eye. Apollo holds in his heart the most darkest of secrets; one that he can't tell anyone, because if he does...! Features- I've tried to make the story very dramatic and emotional.
- You can play as Apollo Justice.
ChaptersTrial Former - 1 ( Click here to play) Nathan Harley has been accused of a most horrific murder, but that's not what worries Apollo... Trial Former - 2 ( Click here to play) Is there anything Apollo can do to rescue the situation? Trial Latter - 1 ( Click here to play) There is nothing but fire at the end of the metaphorical tunnel that Apollo is travelling through. Can he escape? Trial Latter - 2 (In progress) How can Apollo possibly escape from his situation? Determination alone will not get him far... WalkthroughAcknowledgements- gotMLK - For making me some brilliant sprites!
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| Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:40 pm |
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Tap
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Well, this was very interesting, Meph. I enjoyed the trial despite it being a bit confusing. I don't really have any negative things to point out except that I don't remember where but when you presented wrong evidence, the Judge's sprite was floating above the Defence's bench. One last thing - the Judge in the photos taken by the CCTV Camera should have a blonde beard since the victim does have blonde hair.  Keep up with the good work!
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| Wed Jul 28, 2010 1:31 pm |
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Singapore123
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I just played and saw the autopsy report and it is 10:00A.M. Is it like that?
Nice 3D Image.
(Can you write a walk though?)
_________________viewtopic.php?f=50&t=6352&start=0How I rate trials: Pass: Ace: 91 - 100 points B: 75 - 90 points C: 60 - 74 points Fails: D: 50 - 59 points E: 35 - 49 points Fail: 20 - 34 Ungraded: 1 - 19 The score is the average of: Content, spoilers, grammar, PW/AJ/ME style, and maybe more. (And yes, I keep a very high standard.)
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| Wed Jul 28, 2010 1:57 pm |
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Meph
Traitor to the AAO crown
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I'm glad you both liked it.  Tap wrote: I don't remember where but when you presented wrong evidence, the Judge's sprite was floating above the Defence's bench. Do you remember what the judge said when that happened?  Singapore123 wrote: (Can you write a walk though?) Sorry. I won't. If you get stuck, you can ask me questions in spoiler tags (but keep in mind that I'm going on holiday soon). 
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| Wed Jul 28, 2010 2:24 pm |
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Singapore123
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In 3 or 4 days, depending where you are.
_________________viewtopic.php?f=50&t=6352&start=0How I rate trials: Pass: Ace: 91 - 100 points B: 75 - 90 points C: 60 - 74 points Fails: D: 50 - 59 points E: 35 - 49 points Fail: 20 - 34 Ungraded: 1 - 19 The score is the average of: Content, spoilers, grammar, PW/AJ/ME style, and maybe more. (And yes, I keep a very high standard.)
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| Wed Jul 28, 2010 2:28 pm |
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Hodou Okappa
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"I have called the witness to testify about about the evidence..." Oops.  Well the first thing I noticed is the new Save/Health bar on the top. Awesomesauce. Also trial parts seem to link properly now. This is pretty good. I like how it still isn't really obvious who he's covering for. The plot is intriguing. Ah... It's far too easy though. I adore your crime photo btw. Clever use of the AAI sprites. I like how the only AAI talking sprite you used was the only one who looks at the camera, too.
_________________ Currently one of four QA reviewers! PM ShadowEdgeworth to have your trial considered for the Featured Trials list!AKA: okappa, Hodou Masaka, Hodosaka, elkappa. And it's pronounced Hoe-doe.
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| Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:41 pm |
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Admiral Canuck
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Very good prologue, I must say! Reminds me of Turnabout Succession.
I haven't gotten a chance to play all the way through Trial Former yet, but I will once I take a break from my own project.
_________________ I'm difficult to find on the forums these days, but if you do see me, I should be easy enough to talk to.
Featured Trial: Turnabout Escort: Trial Former - Trial Medial - Trial Latter
Comedy Trial: The Worst Turnabout
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| Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:49 pm |
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Meph
Traitor to the AAO crown
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okappa wrote: "I have called the witness to testify about about the evidence..." Oops.  Oops indeed.  Fixed. okappa wrote: Awesomesauce. I'd like to try some of that! okappa wrote: This is pretty good. I like how it still isn't really obvious who he's covering for. Yes, but it doesn't play with the player's emotions as much as I want it to. Fixed. 
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| Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:15 pm |
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Wackyman
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This is an interesting trial. Can't wait for Trial Latter. 
_________________Check out my first trial co-created with Dypo_deLina Firing up the Turnabout!Creator of Shiori Kimura in Requiem of the Shadows, Trama Salamander in Cold State, Maria Popple in Desertia, Payler Pik in Leo Minor and Desmond Killton in Vermilion Sunset. In non-RP land, you can call me Wacky or Wacky McWack.  
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| Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:55 pm |
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henke37
Security expert / tools programmer
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Maybe you shouldn't number the photos from the camera. It kinda makes it obvious that there will be more than one.
_________________ Currently working on a trial engine in Flash. I am looking for assistance.
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| Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:28 pm |
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Danielinhoni
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Agree with that. Or at least don't number the 1st one.
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| Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:33 pm |
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Meph
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henke37 wrote: Maybe you shouldn't number the photos from the camera. It kinda makes it obvious that there will be more than one. That's how they do it in the real AA games, but if you want me to, I will. 
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| Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:43 pm |
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Hodou Okappa
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Being the magnificent b****** I am, I would have kept all mentions of it to the minimum and not revealed it even until the very end, long AFTER they had testified. But that could get very confusing. If you're going to keep the reveal, I'd just leave it where it is then since it's a good cliffhanger.
_________________ Currently one of four QA reviewers! PM ShadowEdgeworth to have your trial considered for the Featured Trials list!AKA: okappa, Hodou Masaka, Hodosaka, elkappa. And it's pronounced Hoe-doe.
Last edited by Meph on Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:08 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Removed a swear word.
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| Thu Jul 29, 2010 1:43 am |
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JDavidC
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In one frame, Payne says conjure instead of conjecture.
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| Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:09 am |
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Singapore123
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JDavidC wrote: In one frame, Payne says conjure instead of conjecture. Ahh! I wanted to say that! (I like the update Unas made.)
_________________viewtopic.php?f=50&t=6352&start=0How I rate trials: Pass: Ace: 91 - 100 points B: 75 - 90 points C: 60 - 74 points Fails: D: 50 - 59 points E: 35 - 49 points Fail: 20 - 34 Ungraded: 1 - 19 The score is the average of: Content, spoilers, grammar, PW/AJ/ME style, and maybe more. (And yes, I keep a very high standard.)
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