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Trial Showcase: Turnabout Party.(*Part-2 Trial Released*) 

How do you rate this trial so far?
5 Excellent 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
4 Good 50%  50%  [ 2 ]
3 Neutral 25%  25%  [ 1 ]
2 Bad 25%  25%  [ 1 ]
1 Garbage 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Total votes : 4

Trial Showcase: Turnabout Party.(*Part-2 Trial Released*) 
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Hi! :nod:
This is my first trial.

Plot: A man is accused of murdering one of his co-workers during a New Years Eve party. With little evidence to work with, can Phoenix Wright win this case and find the real killer?

Percent Completed: 60 %

The trial is split into 6 parts (hopefully):

Day - 1(Trial): Click to play
Day - 1 (Inv.): Click to play
Day - 2(Trial): Click to play
Day - 2(Inv.): (Working on)
Final Day:(Trial):

**Note: a part that is listed as a beta version may have a lot of errors or bugs. (not to say that the final ones don't either :) )
Please tell me how you think the trial is coming along. :)

Feel free to comment of send me a PM if you have questions/comments/concerns about the trial.

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<Turnabout Party> Status: Part 2 - Trial Finished.


Last edited by ws49 on Mon Mar 15, 2010 3:17 am, edited 10 times in total.



Wed Feb 17, 2010 1:58 am
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Beta does not mean incomplete, it means "needs tweaking". And you used the term correctly.

  • Frame 1 mixes up "Hear" with "Here".
  • Frame 52 and 53 should have been done using only one frame.
  • Frame 55 and 54 should swap places so that they follow chronological order.
  • The autopsy report has the wrong icon.
  • Frame 75 is empty and should be removed
  • Frame 76 uses a strange date formating. Most people just say "31th December".
  • Frame 78 has too many uppercase letters.
  • Frame 82 has a lowercase I and so does it's copy in the CE. Frame 146 also has this issue.
  • Frame 466 and frame 471 lacks an apostrophe.

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Wed Feb 17, 2010 10:55 am
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Welcome to the community. :)

I really recommend that you don't release public beta versions.

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I say that it's not a problem when they are as good as this. It is fully enjoyable in this state.

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Wed Feb 17, 2010 1:14 pm
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Oh yes, you're right. I neglected to read your first post. XD

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Wed Feb 17, 2010 2:13 pm
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henke37 wrote:
Frame 75 is empty and should be removed


Well, that contains the end "swoosh" for the "Witness Testimony" icon. :D

Any way I fixed What you told me needs fixing. But I would like to know how you like the story and how its presented..

But anyway thanks for the comments...

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Sun Feb 21, 2010 12:53 am
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The trail has been updated to the investigation stage of the first day!

Part 2 trail is in its final stage of editing... and it's coming soon!

I love to here your comments and please rate the trial in the poll at the top of this page...

Thanks!

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Sun Feb 28, 2010 1:01 am
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You should really give a dialogue for when Phoenix gives wrong evidence.
Also, CO-COUNSEL conversations. Add them.


Sun Feb 28, 2010 1:35 am
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Part 2 - Trial is now in beta form!!

Click to play

This part is much longer that the 1st day of the trial, so that's why it came out a little late.

Please leave comments and rate it in the poll above (You can change your answer in the poll... :) )

I project that Part 2 - Inv will take a lng time so please be patient.

Thanks,

ws49.

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