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MrPBJ
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 Trial Showcase: Road To A Turnabout (Formerly Turnabout Bus)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Road To A Turnabout~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hi! Mr. PBJ here for my first trial on this site. It's gone through many names (Road to the Turnabout, Turnabout Highway, Turnabout Crash, and initially, Turnabout Bus). I hope this turns out good and the AAO community enjoys it! Now for some info... Staff- Mr. PBJ (Head, Spriting)
- ShadowEdgeworth (Co-Writer)
Characters/Fancase Info - Defense Attorney: Phoenix Wright
- Co-Council: Maya Fey
- Prosecuting Attorney: Miles Edgeworth
- Co-Council: Fransizka Von Karma
- Defendant: Penny Nichols (now working as a banker)
- Victim: Willy Rodriguez and 22 other people
- Detective: Dick Gumshoe with his newly appointed Junior, (Young) Ema Skye.
- Case Summary: Willy Rodriguez was a public bus driver who was doing his daily routine of driving passengers around, he was driving 25 people, when he was shot in the shoulder. He survived the bullet, but the impact caused him to lose control of the vehicle, and crashed into a building. Killing 24 passengers. When the police searched the scene, Nichols, the only survivor, was sleeping in the van. Takes places somewhere in between 3-5 and 4-4 (when Phoenix gets disbarred).
- Progress: Finished trial and went on with the investigation. The trial only had one cross-examination, so I'm putting the investigation on hold to expand the trial.
UPDATE AUG/29/2009 8:06 PM - Not an update in itself, but some added info. As you will see with the character's ages when the Trial is released, the game takes place somewhere in between the second and third games. Also added info about the detective in charge (guess who). UPDATE SEPT/4/2009 3:59 PM - Changed the timeline to somewhere in between Bridge To The Turnabout and Turnabout Sucession (Phoenix Wright's trial when he lost his badge) also updated the character's ages to match the new timeline and about to start second Witness testimony. UPDATE: SEPT/4/2009 10:02 PMChanged the name from 'Road To The Turnabout' to Road To A Turnabout' and just started second cross examination
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Meph
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 Re: Trial Showcase: Turnabout Bus (Working Title)
Welcome to the forums, MrPBJ. I hope your trial turns out well. 
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ShadowEdgeworth
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 Re: Trial Showcase: Turnabout Bus (Working Title)
Aaah! A co-council for the prosecution! Now that's original! Good luck, dude! 
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MrPBJ
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 Re: Trial Showcase: Turnabout Bus (Working Title)
Thanks, both of you!  UPDATE: Edited Case Summary
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Meph
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 Re: Trial Showcase: Turnabout Bus (Working Title)
Maybe you could use BBCode to make your showcase more clear. 
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MrPBJ
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 Re: Trial Showcase: Turnabout Bus (Working Title)
Changed the title to 'Road To The Turnabout'. I was nearly done with Part 1, but the Trial part was too short, so I stopped working on the investigation and went back to the trial (it only had one cross-examination, now it will have two)
EDIT: Ew, I just noticed it sounds WAY too similar to Bridge To The Turnabout... any suggestions for another name?
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Meph
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 Re: Trial Showcase: Turnabout Bus (Working Title)
I didn't actually notice it sounded like "Bridge to the Turnabout" until you pointed it out to me.
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Powerdrone
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 Re: Trial Showcase:Road To The Turnabout(Formerly Turnabout Bus)
How about just "Road to a Turnabout"? Changed "The" to an "A".
I didn't notice it sounded like Bridge to the Turnabout either.
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MrPBJ
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 Re: Trial Showcase:Road To The Turnabout(Formerly Turnabout Bus)
Hey, thanks! I listened to Meph and was gonna keep it as 'Road to the Turnabout', but that sounds a lot better!  (btw, am I the only one who thinks that smiley makes Pearls look like she has a goatee?)
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Meph
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 Re: Trial Showcase:Road To The Turnabout(Formerly Turnabout Bus)
MrPBJ wrote: (btw, am I the only one who thinks that smiley makes Pearls look like she has a goatee?) Yes, you are. 
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MrPBJ
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 Re: Trial Showcase: Road To A Turnabout (Formerly Turnabout Bus)
Added HTML to the first post!
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RandomJibberish
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 Re: Trial Showcase: Road To A Turnabout (Formerly Turnabout Bus)
Put the whole list between Tags. EDIT: I didn't realize they'd disapear XD
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henke37
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 Re: Trial Showcase: Road To A Turnabout (Formerly Turnabout Bus)
What RandomJibberish meant to say was to put [list] at the beginning of the list and [/list] at the end of it.
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MrPBJ
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 Re: Trial Showcase: Road To A Turnabout (Formerly Turnabout Bus)
I know. But apparently someone already edited those for me. Prob. Meph.
And here's the image I'll be using in the beggining of the trial...
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Meph
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 Re: Trial Showcase: Road To A Turnabout (Formerly Turnabout Bus)
Why is the judge floating in that image? MrPBJ wrote: I know. But apparently someone already edited those for me. Prob. Meph. Yes. 
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